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a subtle sort of brilliance ([personal profile] theladyscribe) wrote in [community profile] avandell2009-04-06 03:49 pm

one kiss and my soul wanna burn

title: one kiss and my soul wanna burn
characters: Castiel, Dean (sorta Castiel/Dean)
word count: 100
summary: Castiel falls.
notes: Part of the Bruce Springsteen Fic Project. Title is from "Seven Angels." Thanks to [personal profile] joans23 for the once-over.

one kiss and my soul wanna burn

He falls. It's not nearly so dramatic as he thought it would be, no rain of fire or scourge come to cast him out of heaven. There is only him, pushing Dean Winchester to the ground as the world explodes around them.

He doesn't have time to think about what he's doing -- thought will only come later, after the battle is won and the war is over. Until then, he won't even know that he fell.

For now, though, he holds on, keeping a hand over the man's eyes as the brilliance of God shines out over the Earth.

[identity profile] lizzydoodle024.livejournal.com 2009-04-06 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
this was.... wow.

Harsh, and beautiful, and painful.

"For now, though, he holds on, keeping a hand over the man's eyes as the brilliance of God shines out over the Earth"- chills

[identity profile] lizzydoodle024.livejournal.com 2009-04-06 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I can definitely see the similarities, but you really made it your own!

Plus if you gotta take inspiration from something, Raiders of the Lost Ark is top of the list! : )
lark_ascends: Blue and purple dragonfly, green background (Default)

[personal profile] lark_ascends 2009-04-06 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
That last line is gorgeous.

[identity profile] joans23.livejournal.com 2009-04-07 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
pushing Dean Winchester to the ground as the world explodes around them This image just ... haunts me. So perfect.

[identity profile] kira-bouviea.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
This is just so atypical, I really love it. And your use of language. *is jealous*

[identity profile] kira-bouviea.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Dude, is that an Obama icon? Can I steal it?

[identity profile] kira-bouviea.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 04:10 am (UTC)(link)
Sweet Thanks!

I'll go check out the comm in the morning. I do love me some icons.

[identity profile] janie-tangerine.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 07:55 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, this was just so beautiful and the writing is gorgeous. And the fact that it was Bruce inspired only makes it even better, that song is just so perfect now that I think about it. I loved it!

[identity profile] cordeliadelayne.livejournal.com 2009-04-15 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, that was really lovely.

[identity profile] invisiblelove.livejournal.com 2009-04-16 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful imagery. Wonderful job <3