What's really funny is the fact that I took *forever* to come up with the structure of this story. It started off with "the first time... the second time... etc." and it was just clunky and ugh and I nearly trashed the whole thing. And then I thought, why not put the events out of order? And it worked!
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What's really funny is the fact that I took *forever* to come up with the structure of this story. It started off with "the first time... the second time... etc." and it was just clunky and ugh and I nearly trashed the whole thing. And then I thought, why not put the events out of order? And it worked!