ext_19477 ([identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] avandell 2007-04-05 06:04 am (UTC)

Nicely done. Made me feel a bit of vertigo. *g*

I especially liked this bit of description:

He flies over the ocean, the sun sparkling on the water like so many shards of glass on the asphalt along the highway.

Great analogy.

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