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a subtle sort of brilliance ([personal profile] theladyscribe) wrote in [community profile] avandell2007-04-18 04:55 pm

Fic: Talkin' Bout Love (TNverse)

Title: Talkin’ Bout Love
Characters: Dean, OFC (Dean/OFC)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 417
Summary: And then one night, she's off work early and walking down the street to Joe’s and there it is.
Notes: Written for the [community profile] spn_het_love challenge: These Are a Few of My Favorite Things. Also a part of my TNverse and a companion piece to Kate (although you don't have to be familiar with it to enjoy the fic). And yes, I know I broke the word count rule. I tried to shorten it, I really did, but I just couldn’t. Title is from Led Zeppelin’s “Trampled Underfoot.” X-posted like crazy.

Talkin’ Bout Love

She sees it the first night he rolls into town – it’s hard to miss, with its rumbling engine and the thumping bass. The gleaming black car turns heads; the man who steps out of it keeps them from turning away. Kate can’t wait to learn more about both of them.

She hopes he’ll take the car to the weekly car shows, but she is disappointed. The man never shows any interest in local events, guarding both himself and his car with a wall of stoicism and mystery. She wonders about this apparent recluse, what his secrets are. But she shakes it off – after all, he isn’t the only one hiding in plain sight.

And then one night, she’s off work early and walking down the street to Joe’s and there it is. That big black car sits in the lot, begging to be touched. Kate willingly complies. She runs her fingers along the sides of the gleaming beast, reveling in the smooth black, the shining chrome.

Her revery is broken by a barked, “Can I help you?”

Her head shoots up. “She yours?” she asks, even though she already knows the answer.

“Might be. Why?” His question is defensive, deflecting.

Kate takes a deep breath and plunges forward. “She’s gorgeous. You’ve kept her in wonderful condition for such an old model. Sixty-seven, Detroit steel, right? They just don’t make them like they used to. Now it’s all fiberglass painted over tin cans. But this… She’s beautiful,” she finishes, out of breath and wistful.

His face breaks into a grin, and Kate can’t help but smile back. “She’s got a V-6 engine. Reworked it myself about five years ago.”

“I bet the mileage still sucks.”

He shrugs and says, “Can’t have everything,” and his smile recedes just a little, as if something bothers him.

“I’m Kate, by the way,” she says, and she sticks out her hand.

“Dean. You know cars pretty well?”

“My dad taught me everything. Only child, and he raised me on his own, so I had a well-rounded childhood. Took more bribery to get me to prom than to get me hunting.” She grins. “Where’d you learn?”

“My dad, too,” he answers, but his breath rattles a bit, and she wonders about his family. “He taught me everything I know.”

“Cool.” She pauses. “I’d invite you to get a drink with me, but it looks like you’ve just come from getting one. So, see you around I guess.”

“Yeah,” he says, “see you around.”

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A/N: Because this song should be retitled "The Love Song of Dean Winchester and the Metallicar," here are the lyrics to Trampled Underfoot.

[identity profile] hhhellcat.livejournal.com 2007-04-18 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Dean is so totally in love with that car that it's hard not to love him for it. Nice job. *nods*

[identity profile] amethyste5.livejournal.com 2007-04-18 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Chicks dig cars..

Ok, maybe that's not what he said, but with a car like that, who wouldn't be interested? I'm not even a car person, I'm doing good when I can tell you what color and how many doors and I love it!
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[personal profile] lark_ascends 2007-04-18 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Heee. Oh, yes that car is a part of him.

[identity profile] starrylizard.livejournal.com 2007-04-19 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, the car. *Smiles*

[identity profile] elanurel.livejournal.com 2007-04-19 05:54 am (UTC)(link)
Well...I'll forgive you this time for going over the word count. (Hey, I did, too...) I like the connection between them and most especially the fact that her love of the car was natural and unforced.

[identity profile] elanurel.livejournal.com 2007-04-19 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Does it help if every word in the story is absolutely necessary? ;-P

I keep telling people that it is, but they just end up looking at me funny. Snark is very important, however...

[identity profile] elanurel.livejournal.com 2007-04-20 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
At least you'll understand. It might just be the two of when the next chapter of BTH is 30,000 words long, mind...

[identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com 2007-04-19 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, I think we've reached a point where we can't watch Dean without expecting the Metallicar standing near him. :) (Or his clothes off. Hmm.)

[identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com 2007-04-19 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, cuz it's partial nudity. Doesn't count.

Mr Kripke? Next season, if you don't want to worry about getting renewed or not? Do what you do in SPN but add. nekid. boys. I think that would solve the problem. *nods* (I'm a grown up healthy person with profound depths. Obviously.)

[identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com 2007-04-19 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I wasn't giving you that look. I was practicing. Brushing up on my acting skills. Cuz I want to play the angry banshee.

[identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com 2007-04-21 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah...but...but... I started the Dean clothes off thing. So...ok. You get to play the banshee...and I'll play the nurse treating his wounds? :)